குடிமகன்

Your lamenting of being an ‘ordinary citizen’ whose daily chores effectively eclipse the finer feelings for the social malices viz.foeticide, casteism born with the birth of a child et al can be a good reason for appreciating your writing.

But, the bewildering high sounding preludes to the theme takes away the tag of your being an ‘ordinary citizen’ . Do these things really add anything to the core matter?

Is it ‘echchangal’ or ‘michchangal’ of time?

How any thought can be irretrievable without any cause or deed?

It is true that no one’s words could reach you without your own volition. But, how come the river’s course to the destination sea could be compared to the above?

I can see the powerful observation in the later parts with simple words but with full of concern. But the the initial paras do not resonate the same